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Our family

Family is all today
a small fragmented part in society
still continues to together stay

all others are friends
who lisp...
who except a loved one will ever kiss
a one fading into oblivion...
hoping one may stay with love and affection..
if it comes ones way
you are lucky
that I must say
New York still welcomes you
till this day

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

mand

11 years 8 months ago

There is nothing like home

There is nothing like home sweet home. It's great when families stay together and good friends are something to be cheerished.

I like the homely feel of this one.

It sends a positive message.

Thanks for sharing!

LOve Mand xxxxx

loved

11 years 8 months ago

It sends a positive message.

thanks that's the purpose
a poet here is suffering

wesley snow

11 years 8 months ago

This is my day...

another semi light hearted poem.
Thanks.

loved

11 years 8 months ago

thanks

the snow man
comes along
after very long.....

Ian.T

11 years 8 months ago

Loved

New York, now another place to search for you, I am so glad that you carry your home on your shoulders and wherever you are you put it down and make it so.
I can't make it to New York but the old one is just up the road from me, we will have to meet in Spirit young Bard.
Then the directive is that you should write a greeting to your friends here for all to see and for ever be, Yours Ian.T

loved

11 years 8 months ago

and who is god

And who is god

When I was young ...I asked my teacher ...ma'am why does the Earth have human beings... and why there are no more Earths elsewhere ....there must be
she said
No there is only one Earth and God made it
I asked who is God.

she put a finger on her lips....shh shh shh

today I read some news

NASA says 4.2 billion Earths elsewhere....
I think

God must be a factory man

A great manufacturer too

God bless!

Ian.T

11 years 8 months ago

Answer

Naturally!! lol
Number 42

loved

11 years 8 months ago

42

yes 42 ..
women and children first
then men ...

spoke in in audible tones
the Captain Of the ship
Titanic

He knew of no other world
There was no
NASA..
then.....

scribbler

11 years 8 months ago

hello

Family units are the final refuge from a world growing increasingly hostile to the individual.... ones way or one's way? Also it will be a cold day in hades before you'll find Me in New York lol...................stan

loved

11 years 8 months ago

this NEW YORK

reference is
becoz the poet belongs to NY
not I
thanks
Stan