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AP by BlueDemon77

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AP by Ron Woodruff (BlueDemon77)

You the kind, my muse in the past

Never have minds and bodies worked

with such little effort

a day I know, and grabbing

the power and the scrotum

I knew it would be the end

......but I am powerful

You have been so gracious

took responsibility yet

always knew that an

impardonable sin had been shouted

You hugged me and kissed me, knowing

and you did't want me away, maybe what we had

was truly rare. You message me, ask me questions

I show a brave face, one not scarred by

the sandblaster that shredded me.

I stay and hear how much you miss me....like razors

You are so kind I feel weak.

Your voice, your image, make me want to start again...

but I am a man and I deserve to pay for my wrongs.

Ron

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About the Author

Region, Country: Columbus, Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Rimbaud, Coleridge, Sylvia Plath, Robert Lowell, Allen Ginsberg, Ai, Langston Hughes, Maxine Kumin, Anne Sexton, Kerouac, Burroughs, Amiri Baraka, Wallace Stevens.