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Jan 14, 2014
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HEARTLESS
HEARTLESS
When did your heart
lose its beat for me
why did your embraces
grow cold and meaningless
what took away the forever
in your eyes.
When did you stop
looking at me.
I sink each day into an oblivion
without you
You were my breath
the maker of my dreams
my resurrection.
Now, you are my death
and your indifference
is my crucifixion.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
11 years 5 months ago
Well,
Well it's a sad, sad poem a true heartache, you can feel the pain as you read.. Well written. Regards Roscoe...
Seren
11 years 5 months ago
Dearest Joe
This just drips pain and agony I cant think of anything to offer in the way off suggestions its a sadly moving and delicately beautiful in its darkness
with love your Jayne xxx