we all are actors

As we age and are about to leave the stage

do not rage… we all are simple actors on a small stage … times the platform ….we stand in just a corner…. as strangers all around …. so I have found a solution…. to lessen human mental aberration …. try and detach from all around… be a man simple and sound …. believe yourself to be a new passenger …about to board a train -----heaven bound… with no return… leaving all memories… for times galleries… some years hence ,someone may recall… we once too traveled…..lessen your human desired burden .. to be remembered.. by whom…..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

raj

11 years 5 months ago

As we age we become more

As we age we become more philosophical don't we and begin to understand our purpose and role in the time span we are blessed to share with all elements of nature. passing on the baton to generation next. You have tickled the minds for sure. would be interesting to see how you work on this poem from draft stage to revised...

loved

11 years 5 months ago

Actually Geremia is a classic poet...

I read his laments
and my heart bleeds poems

you are a new found a young man
may be from Bombay
As you now encourage
I shall convert this to a poem
just for you soon
tc love and regards
Dear raj ur sublime

raj

11 years 5 months ago

Loved, as you can see, not me

Loved, as you can see, not me but you yourself have posted it as a workshop poem. I merely shared my thoughts / comment

loved

11 years 5 months ago

wow wrong foot

which workshop is this
still ur wish is my command
shall do
my friend

raj

11 years 5 months ago

Frankly I don't know which

Frankly I don't know which workshop it is. I said so because 1. your post is not registered as a Blog and 2 after opening it the "workshop" tab turns to active mode "Grey color"...anyways, if you can make poem out of it, i believe it would be a good theme

loved

11 years 5 months ago

thank you

shall