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Feb 04, 2014
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Crazed Belief
Sickened with anger
Riddled with rage
Where are the values? The loyalty?
Erased with youth and corrupt minds
How can I belong when my mind is so different?
Different to who they are
Different to how they see
There is no 'we', only I
For only I can truly plea for change
Only I can conjure my own faith
Through my eyes, they are all deranged
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Race_9togo
11 years 5 months ago
Hello Stephanie,
I have no criticism of this poem at all. It is powerful, emotional, and most excellent.
Just wanted to say how much I enjoy this, and all of the poems you have posted.
Thanks
Poem
11 years 5 months ago
Perfect
Hi Stephanie,
It sounds just simply perfect! :)
Cheers,
Kavi