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Feb 10, 2014
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S o f t W a i v e
the room light
bulb blazes fierce
throwing like a noon
day sun
the shadows
askance
but theres a haze
softness rounded
on textures
eyes trained of a
months worth of
chilled snow crystal
rounded topography
chimney plumes
rising as a city bends
and speeds past
beyond bus window
dreamers
stretches reading
the black band
like a shadow
racing across
her curling
hip
cupped with light
like a wave
the patterns
of dreams
like leopards spots
reclining
down long
legs
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
emeka ozurumba
11 years 5 months ago
very intricate piece
naturally this poem is to be aimed at simplicity but opens a labyrinth to depth askance
Esker
11 years 5 months ago
as i say..
in real life i mumble....have difficulty phrasing in
simplicity...my ordinary speech is a jumble
poetry was a magic world
still is....
its just a set
a scene
..
thank you..
Seren
11 years 5 months ago
Steven
I called in before bed to have a read, some great imagery in this one my friend beautifully done(as always) :)
much love JC xxx
Esker
11 years 5 months ago
descripts....
touring touring
the field of work always
changing
but not the worker
a set....
scene...
thank you..
Roscoe Lane
11 years 5 months ago
Another,
Another great read, almost as if it was magical. Regards Roscoe..