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Feb 11, 2014
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Forgo the King..
winters shadow
like the fluid sundogs gleaming
edge a soft beauty
their careful swift wings
will walk with me
bend harsh this deliverance
in these times
for he wears no crown
that all can see
humble
with his love
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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emeka ozurumba
11 years 4 months ago
supersonic
the leaves are bowing in the poem, but the imagery of the crown seals it