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Friend I Say

Friend I Say

Seeing a space inside my head,
from corners four to centre stage.
Inside that man I see is honest bred,
perhaps he knows the weight of age.

To stand outside this room his house,
then comment upon his stance or gait.
Gives same the right of Rat to grouse,
lest we send this man to glibly state.

He mustn’t dance on cathedral floor,
natural the steps that make his choice.
To make good his sense he will ignore,
those who speak of kings in godly voice.

He shall have no kings among men,
nor instruction of or against his will.
Honour his own life, that of his kin,
then friend you’ll be now, until.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: What else to say..

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

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Region, Country: Scotland, Ayrshire land of Burns.., GBR

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Seren

Seren

11 years 5 months ago

Roscoe

What wonderful poem, I cant see anything to suggest at this moment I am still moved by the words,

Kudos

love JC xxx

alidzain

alidzain

11 years 5 months ago

like it

i like it..by the way, you misspelled the friend in the title but other than that, its all good

Alid

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

11 years 5 months ago

Thank you,

Thank you, i will correct my mistake if i can. Regards Roscoe..

R

raj

11 years 5 months ago

Roscoe

I liked it most of all for the style of presentation..

Regards,

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

11 years 5 months ago

Thank you,

Thank you raj, your comments are very appreciated. Regards Roscoe..