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Mar 01, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Only God knows.......ed

We all live in a wilderness of time
none knows
what can happen
the next moment...

Perhaps a tsunami,
a nuclear explosion
or
the arctic melting overnight
and
the seas washing away all shores
submerging all land,

all is in the unknown hand
I call nature
you may call
God
man

and

yes
woman…..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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R

raj

11 years 4 months ago

Loved

i could read that the theme of your poem is about uncertainties of life irrespective of who brings about the end...but could not understand why you have chosen the title you have...

Regards,

loved

loved

11 years 4 months ago

yeah so true

a guy on another site chose the title
can you suggest a better one
thanks raj

Rula

Rula

11 years 4 months ago

I'd say

Only God knows...as a title

alidzain

alidzain

11 years 4 months ago

hi loved

I second Rula's suggestion. "Wilderness Of Time" is another one I could suggest..I leave it to you decide which is more fitting.

Alid

Rula

Rula

11 years 4 months ago

khalid

It is meant to show that it is edited
Loved... I'm happy you liked the title.

loved

loved

11 years 4 months ago

it is a must

to thank and acknowledge the other
who does contribute
I could have stated
by Rula
but twas not necessary
khalid