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Mar 21, 2014
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The walk
I see you from a distant
my yells fall on deaf ears
the window pane is the barrier
I step out in the open
the snow chills
but the hearts warmth thrills,
I seek to hasten up
as in the wilderness slaps the breeze
reminds me of stark nudity
as I have left the brief
naked in mind, body and soul
I hark for thee
Oh Lord I am still unable to stalk
as I now alone walk.
to return to my cove
a blessed dark
cold merciless dungeon
saddened by my folly
that you will hear me
maybe!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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