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Apr 14, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Positively negative

See not only the dark side of life
there is more brightness
than what one can visualize ...

just see the positive side...
and smile .....
darkness is just for a while

so the longer part of day
in broad day light do smile

just don't in the darkness of life while
friend smile
see me
Smile!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 2 months ago

Loved

If it were not for darkness,
what would there be
to judge the light that you walk toward.
A good write young Bard I hope to see more of these from you,
Yours as always Ian.T

alidzain

alidzain

11 years 2 months ago

loved

be it a candle
or the sun
light is often appreciated
when darkness comes
if that is untrue
then we won't see the moon
in the contrast of colours
its beauty won't bloom

Alid