You two..Ian and Jess

You two

I tell all my good friends
that Ian and Jess
are the lights
the torches
the candles
the flames
and
just say any names
who have reached out
from earthly to heaven domains

to teach me poetic games
which one day,
some day
all poets will frame
in their minds
as do you two

and

I love the way you polish a poet,
innocent of poetic nuances
like you always do
You two

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Ian.T

11 years 2 months ago

Loved

We is just Neoistic in our ways, the grand teacher Jess, and then me who talks too much, using the things taught to me by others, thank you for the compliment young Bard it is held dear, Yours Ian.T
PS:- You are not the only one that can make new words "Neoistic" the taking part in the site of Neopoet.

loved

11 years 2 months ago

grateful

you read it!

Ian.T

11 years 2 months ago

Young Loved

You change your countries as one would change a shirt.
One day you are in Haiti another Canada, now Romania.
Are you an old lag or is this just Jet lol.
You have trouble settling down ???
One day you may pass my abode in Leicestershire do et me know and then I will tidy my present cave and make a cup of special tea, Have a great day, and there was me feeling sad that you were having mobility problems lol, Yours Ian.T

loved

11 years 2 months ago

ha ha ha

you make me laugh
as you smile
have a cup of tea
and fly with me

soar into the heavens of wisdom
where human beings visit
but seldom ...
tis my
okay
our kingdom
come heaven upon earth
when with flying imagination
we all have been done
Then come...

Ian.T

11 years 2 months ago

Loved

You still didn't say where you are lol,
Yours Ian.T

loved

11 years 2 months ago

I thought I did...

still in my skin
at that edge of time
where only loved does
rhyme
okay chime