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May 09, 2014
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Mind... a lit candle This is new and latest
Mind is an ever glowing candle....
which lights up the whole world ..
lead kindly light
into the hearts of darkened souls
who need to evaluate themselves first..
than preach ,
in the shallowness of wisdom...
an egoists resort!
Short sweet and simple.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
11 years 2 months ago
Loved
What ever keeps you as a good person then walk that pathway the end product is the same no matter which rules you follow.
Rules and religions are only guide lines for life it is up to each person how they interpret them, these writes are too open to critical comments as they border on inflicting rules of life on others, when they have their own minds,
Yours Ian.T
loved
11 years 2 months ago
i have never said
follow my mind
Have I?ian>>>>