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May 27, 2014
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Dream ere!
The manifestation of thought
and the remembrance of those
who are now naught
makes voluminous content of dreams
someone is seemingly screaming
far from the poles of eternity
come along with me
your tenure down there
has lost all lure
there can be now no cure
but to stop your dream
stamp it out
to fetch you I am coming
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
11 years 1 month ago
Loved
The longing for the loved one is perceptible in your poem..
Regards,
loved
11 years 1 month ago
Thank you ever so much
in longing
we desire
the breath of life
loved
11 years 1 month ago
the oter one has been amended they say I WHINE
An autumn leaf
Be not alone
all are lonely,
somewhere in the vastness of eternity
someone calls out instantly
still we say wait
time hasn't come yet
then the loneliness vanishes
the unknown comes in one’s dreams
and screams
where have you been!
one says
are you now asking
an autumn leaf
the invisible one smiles alongside
now tis autumn
there is no surprise
hope you too will be
some day
flying about
side beside