Repairs...

Alone...They are alone...
Drawn together they will heal
Hearts alive within the stone
Beat beneath the steel

Nights of yearning, be together
Days, of learning be as one
No matter what the weather
Have awesome times of fun

Hurt yourself no more
Do them the very same
Call it even score
Cancel out the game

Forgiveness is forgetting,
even for a day
For each one that is forgotten
make new remembered ways

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Comments

Seren

11 years 1 month ago

Smile

Higgliest bugs xxxx

Love Jayne...

Geezer

11 years 1 month ago

Thanks...

smiling right back at you! Higgest bugs, love ya, ~ Gee

Lenny of Cohen

11 years 1 month ago

Enjoyed

this well paced and well constructed piece of writing.

Geezer

11 years 1 month ago

Glad you enjoyed...

this was written for some friends that are having some very difficult times. I hope that no matter what happens they find some peace and happiness. ~ Gee