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Jul 03, 2014
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_v a c a n c y_____
astride the plastic truths
rain falling like silver hoops
shop stolen vermouth
drizzling in a patter
pooling reflections
the dazzle blaze of
your eyes
"what's the matter"
seconds curling
within the steel
casing
curtians soothing
sway
drone keep television
bray
whisper to a sigh
the stagnant
heap of order
waits
like a wolf
peach tranquility
luminous on the
extended thigh
ghost ships in
bottles freed
the surly messages
like ticker feed
in germination
feilds of nocturne
and nails
painted white
as moonflower
wills and ways
wants and wilds
the afternoon silver
light bathing
the frost of night
the clouds framed
with winds remorse
the pain lulled
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
10 years 11 months ago
Steve
the title says it all.
"fields" rather than "feilds" I trust you wanted.
Esker
10 years 11 months ago
its a business..its a home..its and ending..its a phone..
a place rula...so much for so many...almost sacred...these..
thank you....