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Barbara Writes
By Barbara Writes, 10 July, 2014

Are you feeling "Angry", "Fear", "Grief" or "Other"? Let's sing it here at Eternal Renga. Come sing a "Song of Passion" with us.

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years ago

Song of Passion

We must learn to sing
Teach us of your ways of love
Show me the rapture

See how the passion rises
Shield me not from true loving (Ian.T)

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years ago

Barbara

If we sub title each state,
Love being the first part
then Loss and so on.
Could you edit the title it needs another "S" to be more Passion lol.
You have a lovely day out there and listen to the bird songs there for me and touch the humming birds with the mind.
Save a space for me in your memories it is how we live for ever here on this Earth plain, Yours Ian xx