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Aug 11, 2014
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see but be not at sea
Perhaps as it seems
we shall have to go
ahead of thee
to welcome yee
into the folds of eternity
where you will not be
found as wanting
the universe has a larger purse
that the earth can boast of
and fellowmen
I have been watching sincerely
that your days on mommy Earth
are more heavenly.....
you may not be as happy
when in the arms
of times unknown wild wilderness
hope you all do know it...
so stay as long as you can
recognise me
a long way we all have yet to see
so be not at sea!
remain happy and friendly
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
10 years 11 months ago
some good verses
How happy we shall be is always determined of how good
are your deeds.
but those are only my beliefs
lovedly
10 years 11 months ago
glad ur efforts have paid
dividends
lesser undiscovered
even if one
reads us
we all feel happy
isn't it?
Ian.T
10 years 11 months ago
Loved
One of your better pieces,
see/sea it was really good to be part of our family.
Yours Ian.T
lovedly
10 years 11 months ago
you and rula
alone constitute my family
jess has gone with the wind i see
raj is in Canada enjoying Chinese feed
who else and yes
Alid is busy....
with his own poetry
EXPLORATORY!