Ms. Dog

and you had me google "Ms. Dog", and there goes the story.

I wanted to share the link, but wasn't sure if it's a good idea.
You have weaved the story with so much beauty.

But then that last line got me thinking (me sweater?)

broadloom of color
the stitch the thread.
sweaters on the coast
were done by wool
the fishermen going out
and coming in from
calamity
identify them with the sweaters
the rocks fish time doing their
work to erase them
as time erases each of us
how we weave our lives
our scars against the
tantamount righteous
ideals we carve in false idols
and our worshipful zen for
things of physical attainment
and wonder

i like how the writing is forming
up here on neopoet of late
the greater challenges as i get
my works underway
abstractions and then a coming
in......
i like the pondering here
and weightiness of write

thank you

been with the dog...following others prints.
thinking about convos i have..
threading the trails all tangled..
there is a beginning and an ending
like a movie or book
the good ones are a tapestry weave
we want to see the order even in the
chaos...

thematics..

i spent time following dreams
that become grand
i have that personality thing
that gets blown open all the time
into the opus

but..

when said and done
its not about my rules
it will arrive again
that whole patience thing
i can rush it
bang things about
send them out
looking for my own
quests...

but ultimately
it arrives
on its own

whatever the muse is
as long as it is..

thank you

If this is what I think it is, I wonder, oh I wonder, but for the lovely use of language. How does it sound to you?
https://soundcloud.com/jess-tapper/ms-dog-by-eightmenout

As always though, the language is superb.
As for it being a chore... I understand. There are times when the poems all but write themselves and others where we must drag ourselves through. One of the things I have found is that regardless of the difficulty in the write both the easy and the hard turn out the same. Just keep plugging and it will change.