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lovedly
lovedly
Sep 29, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
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Love In the moonlight I see your sparkling face

In the moonlight I see your sparkling face
I recollect yours such a charming smile
Where can anyone love so tender ever trace
Except in your romance all my while

The candle light flickers tonight
All fire burns me out like a forest
But still I will keep it aright
When I think of you being so modest

Champagne we shall have so free
All will also enjoy some water of coconut
Candy will be served along with tea
For those who love to have salted peanut

Love and my heart shall rejoice
Tenderness and tears would be your choice

About This Poem

Last Few Words: only love poemy not sonnetry don't count syllables

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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raj

10 years 9 months ago

Lovedly

I know not much about Sonnets, but I found this to be a very tender poem.

Regards,

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 9 months ago

Thank u raj

ur reading it is enough pat on my back thanks friend

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 9 months ago

maiden attempt

do read it with eyes closed
as in Braille
then along with my sonnet
you shall sail

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scribbler

3 years 4 months ago

Hi loved

the thing about sonnets is the number count of syllable in each line is supposed to be the same. This is the main reason I stopped trying to write them. This is a nice poem but from my understanding it's not a sonnet