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Oct 09, 2014
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WHEN DAWN BREAKS
WHEN DAWN BREAKS
I sit by my front door
open to the coming morning
and the silence of the dawn
soothes my troubled soul.
I wallow in my own mystery
alone in this semi-darkness
until daylight strikes
to reveal the world that
has isolated me from itself
and all joys of living.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
10 years 9 months ago
Joe
Once again you have created a soul full crystalline poem.
Regards and best wishes,
lovedly
10 years 9 months ago
you speakthough unknowingly not
but the whole truth
we endeavour to raise your morale
may more such versions of life
immortalize you
wesley snow
10 years 9 months ago
I'm dreafully sorry I have not visited lately.
Between workshops and life it's hard to find the time to just read.
This one is up to your usual standards.
Geremia
10 years 9 months ago
I always appreciated your
I always appreciated your comments, I understand, I am not much of a comments writer. Difficult to control key board==Parkinson's suddenly "turned on me". But I enjoy NEO so much. The quality of poetry is outstanding....and I read everything.
Mille grazie, Wes
Ian.T
10 years 9 months ago
Joe
A great piece though sadness seems to rise before the sun.
Hold in there young soul, the dawn will be a beautiful one, Yours, Ian.T
alidzain
10 years 8 months ago
Love this, bro
Good job.
Alid