Hitler's Unfinished Rape

It reads as though being read to you. Depressing as hell, but obviously that was the point.
You are clever.

There is some unevenness in the meter but that is mostly well anchored by those enjambed single word lines.

Really well segued from the introspection of the opening, through the existential aspects of the middle to the political/philosophical end.

Strange your thinking how can we, [should that be you're? Perhaps with a comma before it.]

Couldn't resist doing a reading. Hope I haven't abused it too badly.
https://soundcloud.com/user536630132/hitlers-unfinished-rape

You had me at the title. Have to disagree with Jess though, I think the meter does need work as the stumbles kept the rhyme for ringing consistent.

but this is an exemplary rewrite.

One of my favorite musical pieces is "Brahms variations on a theme by Haydn". No where in the piece is the original theme missing and indeed it informs the entire work. However, the embellishments and rearrangements make for an utterly different and beautiful piece of music.

The chief difference I noticed was a more judicious use of the line break. Not fearful of having one, two or three word lines gave the poem an opportunity to accentuate certain things.
The enjambment was also cleanly used except in a couple of spots where it was forced to change its meter.
Both poems are excellent, but I applaud Gem's efforts.

I invite you to do that my poetry any time.