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Jan 15, 2011
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Megaton Pixellation
bruise the grandstand
this empty bystander
shelters eyes with dirty
groans the ragged
throne
you needle works
are shinning like sharp
teeth artifice
This slight and delicate
fever thats fickle
your fist holding love
like a wanton sickle
slip me your pang
of lacerate
how I love your
words
to medicate
and they cut away the wires
rusted thick like blistered
cures
and you sway in S-curve
smooth
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
14 years 5 months ago
figure this out
There should be an "r" on
"You (r) needlesworks"
and at the end of a poem
after "smooth"
there should be the word
"refinery"
again all my works are mostly just run
out like I do my fast sketchs
Esker
14 years 5 months ago
about
about tech life How we rely on machines
to seek us our virtual fixes
screen fetch me care and callous seeking
tis music and scene I shall be linking
ad infinitum
and love
that moves our eyes
and sways our ears
with voices pasturized
and pure
the syllables unkempt
and raw
the taste of this does
make the draw
whisper view me love
and need