Innocence lost

The love once shone pure white,
now forever lost from my sight;
A moment lost, I cannot gain back,
of the carefree innocence we now lack
That hour in time eludes capture,
I go on with a wisp of that wonderful rapture.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Michigan, USA

Favorite Poets: Songs of Solomon, do not read much poetry

Comments

musical prayers

13 years 10 months ago

ty for taking the time to

ty for taking the time to read and post your comments, I appreciate it

lou

14 years 5 months ago

HI

This is a very well constructed poem.

lou

scribbler

14 years 5 months ago

lost

welcome ! You have shown that rhyming poetry need not run on in length as so many of mine do. Well done..................scribbler

musical prayers

13 years 10 months ago

ty for taking the time to

ty for taking the time to read... appreciate it

Janice Pearce

14 years 5 months ago

Innocence Lost

Patty, was missing you. Glad to see you back, wonderful poem!

musical prayers

13 years 10 months ago

thanks Jan

Eduardo Cruz

14 years 5 months ago

Sweet Patty

Yes, that marvelous innocents, and now there so much truth in all we see that all we can do is hold on to things that first made us happy. not when youg but when we learn the truth of how we could servive it all.
Living always in that moment.
thanks for posting this peice of peace!
Fast Eddie Esq.

musical prayers

14 years 5 months ago

Hi all

Its good to be back and to see everyone, so to speak. This has been in the closet of my computer for a long time waiting for neo to come back. And it did, And you're all here,
there is no place like home......Ha Ha Love you all....