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Jan 17, 2015
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Of Happiness
Of Happiness
I have all along been sitting and glossing
under an apple tree
all my life
what happiness can be
a simple comparison of combined incidents
some happy
some sorry
and
from the milk of both
if you can but extract
the elixir of happiness
twill a successful story be
of what happiness tis
your poetry lends happiness to me
but let me be happy
and
so end here my story
one must simply be just happy!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
wesley snow
10 years 5 months ago
Just happy
is hard. Good poem kid.
lovedly
10 years 5 months ago
thank you so much Snow man
with Love from kid
loved and lovedly one
like a son eh!
alidzain
10 years 5 months ago
Hi loved
another good one.
Alid
mand
10 years 5 months ago
Yes
I agree, good poem!
Love Mand xxx
lovedly
3 years 7 months ago
NEWER GENERATION MUST
KNOW
What Happiness is
my four happy poems read one by one please