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Jan 20, 2015
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Don’t Disregard the Voices
Simple Simon
Crazy Joe
The Merry Trickster
Aunty Flo
tow the line
until it hurts
throw a spanner
in the works
cut the flower
for the show
leave the bloom
and watch it grow
crank the handle’s
overdrive
disconnect
the whole bee hive
paint snot drying
fast enough
where’s the fire
what’s the rush
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
10 years 5 months ago
Simon
Loved this one it was fast and had a great flow, Yours, Ian.
Rula
10 years 5 months ago
each one is
unique in a way.
The title fits well there.
I really like it Simon.
Thank you.
Geezer
10 years 5 months ago
I loved...
the fast pace and the excellent rhyme and near rhyme! I don't think that it could be better! ~ Gee
weirdelf
8 years 6 months ago
Yep, like the others said.
Something prompted me to check out your profile and
"About me:
read my poems and find out"
Is less generous than your poetry, perhaps a tad arrogant.