hear I come again!

HERE I COME AGAIN
hear I come again!
you compose it
on my behalf
and
I will stamp it fast

I only know you do read
and
only you remain agreed
that my poetry does breed

but alas as Jess says
legs up in the air
come and read me,
if you can't come in
at least cum....
he does mean

and

now he is our poetry chef,
I can't or dare not take liberties
ere he mixes chillies
and
rum in my wine
and cuisine

but so be it

I shall compose
as I always do
a poem as per norms

even if tis to be read
by you a single man
you are my guardian!

composed as for Ian now spearho!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Sparrow

10 years 5 months ago

Loved behave yourself

This could be a grand theme to write of, many poets suffer depression and other things in their searching for that perfect work or cry for help.
We know from some of the pieces you have written that you can write up there with the best of the poets.
You can cry false tears and shout out for help, better for you to whisper grand words to portray your moods..
The title needs an edit "Here" is the correct word, and then again in the second line, still I bet you know this and it is deliberate to attract attention, you have my Ear here,
Take care young Bard and sort this one out a little.
Yours, Ian

lovedly

10 years 5 months ago

thanks Ian

I ain't in kindergarten
i know what is
here there and
ear that can't hear
so glad you caught my hear
as in here
tell all others too
to read me here

lovedly

10 years 5 months ago

and this was composed months ago on ur commment khalid

the poet helped me pick it
so hear
okay
here tis

weirdelf

10 years 5 months ago

I agree with Ian

Loved, I love you, hate you, you sometimes write the 'gems' I often refer to but this begging for attention lacks dignity.
For fucks sake don't do it. It is demeaning and worthless poetry.

You have the talent, use it.

lovedly

10 years 5 months ago

jess no more hankering...u know..

this was history written months ago
Alidzain brought it up
now i damn care
under ur umbrella
i the
rain and sun share
as for me you do still care
all are now aware