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Jan 23, 2015
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Lady Knight and Feminist Scientist (Humor in Poetry) ws Pt 2 (Judyanne)
Lady Knight, Knights of Chivalry
Soul passion, her creation, her discernment
her inherent talent, arts and technology
She strived to attain knowledge from the Internet.
During her virtual interaction she met a feminist scientist
name Samantha.
Then Lady Knight resigned from Chivalry
Burnt her bra in a fit of revelry
and spent her talent chasing the science
of pendulum swing and the associated relevance
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
10 years 5 months ago
Hi Barb
I keep coming back to this trying to find some secondary meaning which might make me see the humor in this. Alas I fear I can't find it. It's a fine poem save a typo or two but to me it's just not funny. Of course it might still be me being too obtuse to see it......stan
judyanne
10 years 5 months ago
stan
It (or you lol) is a little obtuse perhaps but -
what happens to a woman's 'physique' when she burns her bra?
one hopes that this is subtle humour .... don't always need such obvious things as farts
love judy
xxx
scribbler
10 years 5 months ago
NOW!
It gets through my thick skull, Ignore my previous comment. BTW, what does a 70 year old woman have between her breasts that a 20 year old doesn't?...............her belly button lol.....NOWIRUNQUICKLYTOSHELTER
judyanne
10 years 5 months ago
lol Stan
Where is the like button?
xxx
raj
10 years 5 months ago
Barbara & Judyanne
Good collaborative poem strung together at short notice.
Regards,
Barbara Writes
10 years 5 months ago
Raj
It was hard but I'm always up for a challenge