BLIND, DEAF OR DUMB which you prefer

hearing !

well in my time twas

HIS MASTERS CHOICE

Who is the master I asked
none would tell me

I didn't bother
as i could hear
from London to Paris

now I ask the next door guy
what did i say

so to stay deaf
now I pray
why bray
as we all here are gay
sorry gray!
now have
Your say.....
Iam deaf anyway

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

10 years 5 months ago

if the title is a question, my answer is none. lol.
last line "Iam" should be "I am" or I'm".

Alid

10 years 5 months ago

I know I wouldn't like to be blind! but I have a feeling that it's what I will get in my old age! - though none are a happy prospect :)

Nice one Loved

Love Mand xxxx