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lovedly

Mar 07, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

memories only live

Sad but marvelous
memories remain immortal
we love
we lust
all else we do
we must
but memories
only last

all else does rust

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

10 years 4 months ago

How true

And we become prisoners of our memories - especially the bad unresolved ones. We live and relive them as though nothing has changed. This piece touhed something very deep within.

Cheers ... Leonard

10 years 4 months ago

thank you so much

Leonard for ur maiden visit and comment
grateful

10 years 4 months ago

Lovedly...

This is one of your best works that I have read in a while! Short and sweet! No convoluted meanings and perfectly understandable. Marvelous! ~ Gee

10 years 4 months ago

that you so see Dearest Geezer...

is a feather in the Neopoet's eye
as they have converted
a poet out of me
and
so I thank
all of thee
Judy and Jess specially

R

10 years 4 months ago

Lovedly

As others before me have commented, this is one of your better ones, though I feel you can work some more on this to make it flow easily on tongue...just my opinion...i wish i could suggest how..

Regards,

10 years 4 months ago

thank u raj sublime

your Blessings were needed
this one fetched
a gold for me =5 stars

10 years 4 months ago

This is pleasing.

Subtle, yet I understood it.

10 years 4 months ago

thank you so much Snowman

on another site
they gave me
A GOLD==5 stars for this one
thanks

10 years 4 months ago

Hi Lovedly

Yes I agree - this is one of your best. :) it's easy to understand and easy to relate too.

Beautiful in it's simplicity.

Love Mand xxx

10 years 4 months ago

thank you mand

all kind minds think alike

10 years 4 months ago

Loved are you Joe ? I am

Loved are you Joe ? I am confuzzled ... damn good poem though whomever wrote it !!

love Jayne x

10 years 4 months ago

no... I am not Joe

I am old Loved now technically Lovedly
coz of computer failure only

thanks many have liked it
awaiting Judy

10 years 4 months ago

Our Jayne

Lovedly was Loved
Sparrow was Ian.T
We still love you just the same your new
Papa xx

10 years 4 months ago

great write loved

No waffle, one of your best
I knew you could do it :)
love judy
xxx

10 years 4 months ago

Thanks Judie

but you took so long to read this
In a competition elsewhere
I got a Gold=5 Stars for this.
Thanks to your teaching
of slitting all waffle
regards

10 years 4 months ago

Thanks Judie

You took too long to read my poetry
which won a gold =5 star
in some competition
Thanks to you
No waffle this!
Judie Regards

10 years 4 months ago

Loved

As all the other poets, a great little write.
Told you that you are OK when you put your mind to it,
Yours Ian..

10 years 4 months ago

thanks

sparrowe ianed