lovedly

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Sweet dreams..waffless

Sweet dreams

Sweet dreams are written in heaven
for those who are happily married

those still distraught
are in fallacious search caught

searching wild in the wilderness
all day all night

so let the wavering winds blow
and as we from here all go

late into the eerie night
day break bring violet light

let red roses spray fragrance too
of love and affection on all of you

like rainbows true
with a smiling hue

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

judyanne

10 years 4 months ago

lol

Nice loved

But 'winds of change' --- too cliche
Can you think of a unique way to say it?
Love judy
xxx

lovedly

10 years 4 months ago

flapping winds may be

what do you think Judie
glad you now laugh at me
rflol hahaha!

scribbler

10 years 4 months ago

hello

Not all marriages bear sweet dreams lol. But I' damned lucky that mine has given me few night mares. Might try let the storms of pruning blow if you want to say that line differently.........stan

lovedly

10 years 4 months ago

squint eyed

Might try let the storms of pruning blow if you want to say that line differently.........stan??????

couldn't follow what and why why lie>?

scribbler

10 years 4 months ago

Oh

Judy suggested a change for winds of change. That's the line I referred to

lovedly

10 years 4 months ago

what would you like it to be as winds keep changing here at

mighty speed
''' let the winds race with speed ''
may be? just see

lovedly

10 years 4 months ago

so let the winds of change

so let the winds of change blow
and as we from here all go

'''so let the winds race with speed
and with it slice away human greed...''
any better is it

late into the night etc....

Sparrow

10 years 4 months ago

I recently gave you a complete list of winds,
any of these will do,
but pick one that in your area doth blow..
So let the Zephyr of life flow.
Come on we wrote of many for you to choose lol,
Take care young Bard and don't get the Wind/Wind up just you do your own thing,
Yours Ian..