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Mar 21, 2015
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ACROBATICS :updated
ACROBATICS
On a flying trapeze
high in a summer breeze
no net below to catch my fall
I ride Life's winds
no cares at all.
I live for the joy
of the moment
and never look down
into the darkness I know
Time flies with me
and I hold on
as long as I can
but I'm starting to fall
again
you won't hear a sound;
no thud, no sigh
no weeping eyes
will follow me down.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
10 years 3 months ago
Joe
very touching indeed...
be well dear friend..
Regards,
Geremia
10 years 3 months ago
Thank you, good friend. joe
Thank you, good friend.
joe
wesley snow
10 years 3 months ago
Rough draft.
Don't know what you're going to do with it. It's quite special as is.
Geremia
10 years 3 months ago
I need to eliminate last line
I need to eliminate last line and polish up some aspects of the piece..
thank you, Wes
joe