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lovedly
lovedly
Apr 04, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

O O O give me a kiss eh!

O O O give me a kiss eh!

hahahahaaa
you said it friend

give me a kiss eh!

never give in

when loss is assured...
but you may still win

I always advise my kids

''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET

BUT DO ASK

IT MAY BECOME A ''YES''

ELSE HOW WILL IT EVER

IF YOU REMAIN SILENT?

They smile and say
Give a 100 dollars
right away

I can only afford ten
they take it happy and go away
and
KISS MY NOSE FOR FREE!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 3 months ago

too much seriosness is sad

and as u said
never remove/unpublish
some bigger idiot will love it
and that's not bad! so be it
Sir,
Snowman glory be to thee

Sparrow

Sparrow

10 years 3 months ago

Loved

you give the Kids too much money, let them earn it, each Dollar would be worth double as it will help you and also help them in many ways.
You can send any extra to me, let me know when you have some, I shall send my address then..
Take care, mind you the write needs a tidy but is good, I am waiting for another of excellence from you,
Yours Ian

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 3 months ago

did you mean

more excellent?
needing morer tidying
hahaahhaaa
Ian donno be sooooo funny
this is poetry honey
no no money
cents maybe for thee
for chewing gum may be

Sparrow

Sparrow

10 years 3 months ago

Loved

When I buy chewing gum I just suck off the coating then throw the rest away, my old teeth don't take kindly to chewing much lol, Big straws and a damn good blender that's the way to go,
Have a great holiday, I have to go visit my Kin on the other side of the mountain here, damn it Sister's grandkids reaching 21.
Sadie and the children send their love as always, Yours Ian

mand

mand

10 years 3 months ago

Hi Lovedly

Brilliant, I love it, it's filled with love and family happiness.

I'm still smiling

Love Mand :)

xxxxx

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 3 months ago

do you see a contrast

silly above as per...Snow man
and brilliant as per you...
let others smile too
but thank you

R

raj

10 years 3 months ago

Lovedly

I think you can make it better...

Happy Easter to you and your beloveds.

Regards,

R

raj

10 years 3 months ago

Lovedly

sorry for my comment....it was just a suggestion and no more..don't think much about it..

Regards,

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 3 months ago

why sorry?

I liked it
that's why I replied it
in any case snow stated '''silly''
and mand said '''brilliantly''
and Ian smiled
you commented
it made Easter easier for everybody

now friend laugh will ye
with me
Let's all be happy
poetry is meant for a release
no!

alidzain

alidzain

10 years 3 months ago

me?

you forget me? (giving lovedly a dirty look) grrrr.

Alid

Sparrow

Sparrow

10 years 3 months ago

Loved

The comments and replies bring smiles to me faster than granny tripping up the stairs lol.
No I is not cruel just a figure of speech lol.
Yours, Ian.

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 9 months ago

you give life

to my 2015 kiss
come alive
how nay times did you sneeze
I shall send that many cents
if you please
suffering from allergic rhinitis
can't give any more
for free
'tis allergic
as infratitus!
google you won' know
thanks though