GLORY SEEKER

He sought glory.....
end of story

About This Poem

Last Few Words: With shoulder and arm problems I' limited to brevity. So here's the short poem of a glory seeking warrior

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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Comments

Sparrow

10 years 1 month ago

Stan

I shall help you to cross this street, and make a senryu out of your words.
I cannot rest until you are better worded and rested.
A shinning brave knight
He sought out glory, clean or gory
Here endeth his story.

Love you lots La, La.
Yours, Sparrow

emeka ozurumba

10 years 1 month ago

so few words

i really liked this to continue unto one of your great writes,but if this is it I'm thinking mnemonic

alidzain

10 years 1 month ago

Stan

here's my contribution

He sought glory with his sword,
displaying courage in battle,
earning respects, land
and a grand title

but..

his greatest glory is not attained
by any form of violence
it is gained when he found
and fought for his woman

for no gold or silver can make a man complete
in the absence of a lover's caress

Alid