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Jun 05, 2015
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Inspired by Keats (June Contest)
When I am frightened all shall end
before my epic poem is through,
ere I have chance to shape and mend
the tales I want to tell to you;
When I can view the storyline
unwritten in my teeming brain
and know that I shall soon resign
from life and all has been in vain;
And when I fear, you poets of such peerless grace
shall never know my chronicle,
then all my wonder I erase
and ponder the ironical.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This is based on Keat's masterwork "When I have fears..."
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Sparrow
10 years 1 month ago
Wesley
No matter if it is Keats or another like poet, you have excelled in this write.
It being simple yet loaded with everything felt for a position in life,
Yours, Ian
judyanne
10 years ago
lol
Just heading of to delete my entry :)
Great take Wesley
love judy
XXX
Rula
9 years 8 months ago
This IS
a master piece sir!!
No wonder!!