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Jun 13, 2015
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Germinonics
Your creation of pain
and
finding a relief,
no,
not in medicine
but emotional poetry
since ages
is complimentary....
as
death is just an inevitable phase
but when will it come?
its like going about a maze!
as some here have been these few years
but your poetry,
to eyes brings tears
Poet we join you in your
medically deteriorating condition
but adore you in your poetic rendition
which needless to say is exceptional
Hope Greater poets are listening!
This is poetic critique
I dare say
for a monumental mountain of a poet!
We all look up to and you all know!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geremia
10 years 1 month ago
You are a sensitive soul who
You are a sensitive soul who sees beyond the word into the heart,
joe
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
a poet need have a vision
vision beyond the beyond
sensitivity is just an icing
a tip of the iceberg
poets must have an emotional quotient
then only one may say
O poet...
THEORY OF INEVITABILITY
READ TOMORROW PLEASE.
Sparrow
10 years 1 month ago
Loved
We can only stand and watch as friends fight, their weapons futile against the end time it will be there on time not a split second either way taking another person from their now into the unknown.
We can only be there as a supporter, watching from the terraces as if watching a football match we have no control over the outcome no matter how much we shout, the game will end only when the final whistle is blown.
A good write there Loved, hope I am not witness to too many journey's.
Take care out there, Yours, Ian..
lovedly
10 years 1 month ago
great
a bit busy take care