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Jul 09, 2015
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your stare penetrates
You stare to kill
Your stare penetrates
deep within
any heart
any soul
you devour all
fully and whole
your stare strikes all
young and old
where in the wilderness
do you command
your hold
let all you behold!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
10 years ago
yo, lovedly
For some reason, this piece reminds me of my former teacher. She's the ''don't mess with me'' type that even the parents won't raise their voice at her. She won't shout and scream at them. She had this look which makes you want to behave but she has a good heart. Once, I lost my pocket money and she treated me during recess.
gee, I wonder how she's doing....
Alid
lovedly
10 years ago
O what a peach
ur too
she must be
a peach