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lovedly
lovedly
Jul 20, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

JULY CONTEST

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My lost Darling STILL TIS JULY

My lost Darling JULY CONTEST

I am still in school of thoughts
When to pull up my socks

when will she look at me?
when will I do what

perhaps a kiss
but the fatso there
alone at me does stare
how to avoid the black horn one
I am scared

so I leave the school from the back door
all are unaware
till I see another guy
kiss the one
for whom I my whole life
would lay bare

But alas he too
damn does care

Who is she to me
Oh my Delaware!
of that rascal be aware

I wanted a virgin in you my
Sweety for you I did care!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: this is for July contest your software needs to take care nothing beyond May They say DearStan

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 11 months ago

Loved

July contest should have been in the title but not to worry I see you are too deep in grief to need me to correct you..
There will be another one day lol,
If I could get clearance for one of my Harem, through your picky customs, I would have sent a couple to you, do take care,
Yours Ian.

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 11 months ago

I had reposted

as JULY as per Stan stand
now as per you I will add
Julie here too
OKAY ADDED SEE IT!
herz

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 11 months ago

Damn

Come Saturday I will make you change your mind about July, La, La, Sparrow..

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 11 months ago

la la la laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

ha ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
the ''' ides '''of July have come
and about to go
one day more
and u could still shoot
if u wish so
or spare me a new life
if you can do so

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 11 months ago

Loved

Each month has a period called the ''' ides ''' the reason March is so prominent is because that was the month JC was alased by Brutus, lol.
So you beware the next ones, ''' ides '''of Augustus..
He, He, and Digit may come visit you all again, Yours J Sparrow