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Sep 08, 2015
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Infantile
Perceptual infantality
Mentality of added
Arrogance prideful in
Ignorance
Thinking more but
Knowing less
Doing more with
Soul suppressed
Getting farther in
Your skin
Seeking deeper
From within
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
wesley snow
9 years 10 months ago
I like it.
But I'm a sucker for a reasonably structured poem.
Hi, I'm Wes. Seems you've been gone a while. Glad to see you back.