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Sep 11, 2015
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TESTING THE WATERS:
TESTING THE WATERS
I test the waters
carefully
with words chosen
singularly
my thoughts fall
as they come
silent to most
heard by some
or none
i never did hide
behind metaphor or rhyme.
no time
to add mystery
to a world mysterious.
Let the heart speak
its stillness
and the soul will listen
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
10 years ago
wonderful
Joe!!! Your words speak loud.
Geremia
10 years ago
thank you, Rula. Your words
thank you, Rula. Your words have given me encouragement to write again/
joe
Esker
10 years ago
wow..thank U rula for inspiring Joe....
kick ass!..
listening to White buffalo...sons of anarchy
feeling wretched..
reading inspiration poetry!!
thank U Rula and Joe..
Geremia
10 years ago
Thank you, my friend.. joe
Thank you, my friend..
joe
scribbler
10 years ago
Hi Joe
Those last 3 lines pretty much sum up what most of us attempt to do with poetry.............stan
Geremia
10 years ago
Yes. I hope they do. joe
Yes. I hope they do.
joe