bon voyage

My voyage starts
ere the sunrises
in the Far East
always beyond yonder hills
any where you may see

the ship sails away
in the opposite direction
to the West
the sun knows it,
it chases me daily
as I reach the port
my ultimate destination

it helps me guide
to where I park
ere I get lost
in the dark
and
then it wishes me
Good bye
Do rise.....

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

weirdelf

9 years 7 months ago

I feel so sad reading this

You know for all the shit I give you I do respect you as a poet and this poem has a feeling of defeat about it.
Don't give up, dear loved, if for no other reason that I love tormenting you so [grins]
Really, you have value and you know I recognise it, even though I am harsh.

lovedly

9 years 7 months ago

i know i know

I really miss you so
what a poet
would ever I have been
Jess
if you had been so kind
not to kick me

the deserving get the salutations
and
you are Jess above all my hearts palpitations

with out your kicks on my behind
I would have been lost
and last left far behind
in this vast ocean
I call time

not without
any reason or rhyme ...
Jess you are a man so refine
you can alone determine
a diamond out of a god forsaken mine
those who know like me only
I bow to thee
and now once again
you may kick me
for not saying ye
with love from Lovedly

Geremia

9 years 7 months ago

This poem is so well written

This poem is so well written and filled with genuine pathos. Listen to Jess. He is for me the true voice of reason, What he nay lack in tact, he makes up for in compassion and truth.

joe

lovedly

9 years 7 months ago

Yes Joe

I regard
you Ian judy jess and stan
now snow man also
at the same level of polevault
you all now know

lovedly

9 years 7 months ago

POEM IN WAITING TIME LIMITATIONS

To Sir with Love
By Lovedly

I really miss you so
What a poet
would ever I have been
Jess
if you had been so kind
not to kick me

The deserving get the salutations
and
you are Jess above all my hearts palpitations

without your kicks on my behind
I would have been lost
and just left far behind
in this vast ocean
I call time

not without
any reason or rhyme...
Jess you are a man so refine
you can alone determine
a diamond out of a god forsaken mine
those who know like me only

I bow to thee
and now once again
you may kick me
for not saying ye
with love from
Lovedly