a passionate rebirth

Languorus strokes
trace the texture and curves,
the heat gently burns
deep in the pit of my soul

Wooing areola
the tip of your tongue
glides to its target
teasing tips to a frenzy

All reason flees
as straps feather,
brushed lightning
dimples my arms

I am lost in desire
I'm a slave to need,
the langer presses
urgency in its pulse

a spark ignites
as passion collides,
arising to your mouth
lips fire the flames

Undressing my soul
I again loss control,
my vow to never again
is lost to passions spin

Languishing light
tips the veils of morn,
a day of rest awaits
and I feel newly born

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Comments

Joan Rolls

9 years 7 months ago

omg lol

Joan is that you ... I knew a woman by that name from Wingham road was friends with me and my ex husband lol ... long time no see

I wish it was that sort of weekend lol been way to ill ... its a memory more than anything.

Take care J x

Joan Rolls

9 years 7 months ago

Yes jayne it is. Small world

Yes jayne it is. Small world lol. Great to know youre alive kicking and still creating! X

Joan Rolls

9 years 7 months ago

Omfg

I didn't dare think it was you, I see your at Myall Lakes not far away at all !! Holy crap the memories sigh if only we could go back and do it all over again ...

Hows Terry these days ? Omg I cant believe id find you here ive been with Neo nearly 8yrs now its got me to whete I am now

And yes always creating, still sing every now and then but haven't been well enough will fill you in laters

Ive had a read of some od your stuff havent had time to comment will get to it when I get home tonight ... Just drove through Foster actually lol on my way to Newy

Love and big big hugs so good to see you gorgeous

Jayne xxxx

Sparrow

9 years 7 months ago

Jayne

A great sensitive write.
Why do you want to be born a man next time ????? lol
Take care lovely to see you back again,
Yours as always Ian..xx

Seren

9 years 7 months ago

Dear Dada

Hmmm oh I dont wanna be a man trust me ... reread that stanza again lol

Glad you liked it thought it would be a nice change from the stuff I've been writing

mucha love Jaughter xxx <3

Sparrow

9 years 7 months ago

don't you think we have feelings all over LOL, just joking about being reborn a man, its not good living in this shell sometimes, as your write tells me about these things..
I shall go and lay down in a dark room and dream a while !!
Take care young Jaughter,
Yours as always, Ian, Anne, and the children xx