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Nov 22, 2015
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Pew
Sit in the pew,
sing your songs,
and hope your prayers go past the ceiling.
Whilst the people all around you smile
while secretly hating you.
About This Poem
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weirdelf
9 years 7 months ago
Oh, you noticed?
Religion is a source of hate and diviseness,not love,