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Dec 04, 2015
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Because your not here
Because your're
Do you think I cry a lot
And still miss you?
No I don't!
Because your're
Play in the sun with me
Do you think I stay indoors
And hide from the sun?
No I don't!
Because your're
To go and about with
Do you think that I just
Stay home and pout?
No I don't!
Because your're not here
Does not mean that I stop living
And enjoy life!
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
9 years 7 months ago
Heart
The "your're" is an incorrect word use just needs the first "r" to be dropped, or better still use "You are" it will be smoother and run better.
Subtle write, just colour it a little more,
Yours as always Ian..
wesley snow
9 years 7 months ago
I don't know Ian.
Poet, was "your're" intentional. It rhymed with another "e" sound
What say you?