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lovedly

Dec 13, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Another sunset another sunrise

Another sunset another sunrise

The sun as it sets simply says....
give others a chance....
as in the mid of night
you romance.....
as you dance and prance...
let others warm up too
it’s like another cold world....
hope all this knew...

as there is only one sun
you can heat up
in a modern environment
many need the sun more...
as poverty is now on shore..

so the sun smiles...
at the passersby
as others smile
to welcome the tearing
Okay De-virginising of mist...
ere the dawn
of a freshly awakening morn

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

9 years 6 months ago

There is only one sun, one

There is only one sun, one earth but many lives. Only one moon but many lovers. Your poem conjures up many beautiful images. Buddha

9 years 6 months ago

lovedly

thanks the Buddhali
for reading me