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Dec 15, 2015
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The sleeping cat
As the cat lays peacefully sleeping in
the sun its so relaxed and contented that
it curls up in a ball and rests its head
on its outstretch front paws and its tail
peacefully laying at its side. As the sun slowly
shines down on it and makes it feel warm
and safe.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
9 years 7 months ago
I grew up with cats
I owned cats..or they owned me...and I had to give them away
when moving....heartbreaking moments but they went to loving
enough homes....smaller and more social then dogs....a cat is
more personal.....my father in the end had a cat.......they were
a team....tortiseshell coat..."warm and safe" the goal of life
anyones want and desire really...
thank U
Barbara Writes
9 years 7 months ago
Nice poem
Loved reading. my only suggest is a pause ending each the verses