Geremia

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OCEAN'S BLUE

OCEAN’S BLUE

I slip and slide between
dark and light
like a drowning man
swept away with fear and doubt
in a river raging,
blinded to that saving grace
to cling onto.
but as the waters flow
into Ocean’s blue
I will know the time to let go
for we alI must follow…

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Comments

lovedly

9 years 5 months ago

your poetry is so wonderful

Joe
compose one for the welfare of
Neopoet Snow

Geremia

9 years 5 months ago

will try, my friend

Sparrow

9 years 5 months ago

Joe

a lovely piece from your thoughts again,
we all head toward the Ocean..
Take care, Yours, Ian..

Esker

9 years 5 months ago

wow.......ur poetry rocks!

brave....hell man U are a hardrock!
happy to call U friend Joe!
essence...
got that one from U
I understand now
U help me so much
forever
carry the fire my brother
I shall

thank U
and we go on
till the end!

mr wolf!

lovedly

9 years 5 months ago

very few

comment here on very few
you are one
second is Ian

Geremia

9 years 5 months ago

Yes, nothing has changed, I

Yes, nothing has changed, I post for my own pleasure and am glad to see there are true poets on this site who recognize true poetry,

I am just happy I still have a mind.

joe

lovedly

9 years 5 months ago

so am I

as i too have a mind
and hope you will remember me
when reading and commenting poetry
today i saw my profile
hundreds of poems i did compile
but owing to Neopeoets non interest
they remain shelved
unread in files
this ordains NEO'S DEMISE!
Side but what a prize

Geremia

9 years 5 months ago

It is difficult to write,

It is difficult to write, Painful. But I do it for the sake of my own mental health and to remain in contact with friends like you.

[Richard for Joe]

lovedly

9 years 5 months ago

thank you

it is essential to keep
ones mind
ACTIVE