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lovedly
lovedly
Mar 05, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

cell truth

u r truth.....u know it

just woke up after a dream
saw old foggies
all under the
Thames since ages
come alive
some from Nile
some Mississippi
Amazon and Ganges
Brahmaputra too
many friendly Aussies
and were asking me
when am I joining

it's lovely upstairs
all is free
they only miss their cells
all asked me to bring theirs
how to do help them
friendly ones
tell

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Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 4 months ago

Loved

The restless creatures and artefacts of previous lives, worn down by ever flowing streams.
Loved your write, Yours Ian..
I think though that fogies is the correct spelling for someone like me, Old fogies, lol

S

scribbler

9 years 4 months ago

yeah

Would be nice if we Could take some favorite things there wouldn't it? But from my understanding neither type cell can come along lol. "How to do help them".......might consider deleting "do"........stan

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 4 months ago

yeah yeah hi yeah

do
has been done with
as we can't so do
as correctly directed by you
Stan Sir
do not take me seriously too
I am eating humour pills lately

what happened to my poetry
I sent to you