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eightmenout

Mar 07, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

In Search of Peace

The seats are all patiently awaiting
the next congress of eager onlookers
as the lights have shown the pathways to home
and now only shine for serenity

The lonely moon bows its chest in full crest
brushing the image of pregnant trees
onto the placid canvas of water
letting our minds know it is time to dream

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Henry Rollins, Langston Hughes, Emily Dickinson

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Comments

9 years ago

fresh clairvoyants

stale charged air
and nature the sole provider
that saves the savage breast
soothed by imagery and
quiet respite

and the multitudes take too
their chairs..

thank U!

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8 years 12 months ago

Steve

Thanks for stopping by. I needed some good words to read