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Mar 14, 2016
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Left, Never Gone
harbouring from yesterday's fest
thinking what's beyond death
foresee's these future wrecks
ponders inside this beat up chest
as the body lay down to rest
memories flashes before these eyes
smiles creeping its way to place
from rendezvous bliss of haze
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
9 years 4 months ago
Hi there!
Good one. Keep on writing!
Alid
Mariquita Garcia
9 years 4 months ago
:)
thank you.
Geezer
9 years 4 months ago
Welcome Mariquita...
I haven't seen you here before, but I haven't been on much lately. Not quite sure what the write is about, but it seems to be about an older person watching and participating in some festivities and late that night, while preparing to sleep, wondering about the young ones and what they will feel like when they are as old as you? A little more context until people get to know you and what you write might help on that score. I hope that you stick around long enough for that to happen. Nice thoughts
that you shared here. ~ Geezer.
Mariquita Garcia
9 years 4 months ago
hello geezer. :)
Sparrow
9 years 4 months ago
Marquita
Loved this short but to the point write it held more than a lot of lengthy writes.
Keep up the writes, Yours as always, Ian..